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An Unimaginable Story chapter2

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To setting the story: She's was really kindhearted and cheerful girl, fan of many TV shows, but specially Foster's home, which accidentally fall into Foster's world, a place in which she has no home or family, and she has to learn to earn a live, so she was looking for a job when she meets Wilt and the rest of foster's gang by chance, and they take her to Foster's Home, and Madame Foster offered her a place to spend the night. This part of the story refers to the first night of Atrix at Foster's Home, when Madame Foster give her a room, and she says she will sleep on a mat and gives the bed to Wilt, and you know, after many apologies he accepts. XD

"An unimaginable story" Chapter2 :  A very sweet Night

She walked through the corridors of the mansion, recognizing the place with every step while walking,  and the house was very different from what she had imagined when I used to watch the show. It was impressive and way bigger than what she thought! She looked around and upward, noticing that the place looked more and more like an ancient art museum, albeit without any paint, just like it seemed to her when she arrived this afternoon. She was looking for the room she knew was Wilt, Coco, Bloo and Eduardo's bedroom, because she wanted to thank the guys for taking her to Foster's, especially to Wilt, and when she came there, she tried to pass casually, because was supposed she didn't know where are the rooms. She found Wilt humming a song, and she couldn't help giggled a bit, he looked very relaxed and he was getting ready to sleep, but when she saw him there, putting his shoes in his locker, knowing he would have to sleep on the cold floor tonight, like every night, she felt really sad, and she couldn't help telling him:

- Wilt…B...But you have no bed to sleep!!

Wilt turned to her and asked with a evident expression of surprise.
- Uh!...Sorry but....What??!!?

- Uhmmm...I mean, it seems you don't have a bed...

- Uhm…Well…Yeah it's true but, don't worry about that! I'm Ok!...Really!!

- But the floor is hard and cold and it's nothing good for you, especially because you got asthma!!

He looked a bit confused and said:
- Asthma??!

She realizes she shouldn't say that, and then she quickly says:
   - I...I mean, if you keep sleeping there you'll get asthma.
Why don't you come to my room and sleep with me...
Then she felt as strange sensation, like if he had swallowed a lot of butterflies, her knees trembled and her face reflected a faint crimson.  
- I mean, not with me in my bed, but in my bed!…I mean, not my bed, but the bed Madame Foster gave me… I would gladly give you the bed! You can sleep there!really!!!!

That last thing left him more impressed. "Oh boy!" he thought, when he realized she was genuinely concerned about him, and something deep within him was telling him to accept her kind gesture.

- Sorry but….I'm sorry but, I can't accept that. If I sleep in your bed….Where do you will sleep then?

- Oh, don't worry! I could sleep on a mat.
and she smiled very sweetly.

- I'm sorry but...you don't know me!...w...why do you want....

- but I would like to!!! - Said her with great excitement.

- ....Really??!!!

- YES!!!!!

He was really impressed. Specially by the way she said "yes". So sure, so heartfelt, so genuine!! No one ever asked him why he had no bed before, or even had offered to find one for him...and then he met this total stranger who wanted to give a place to sleep!...her place!....the bed that she was received just that day!! Without hesitation!!! He didn't understand why her kind gesture, but he was so touched by such a noble action, so he thought it for a second, then he smiled and said:

- Oh...well...Ok! If you would like…

She was so excited when she said " Then, COME ON!!!" that she even didn't wait until he finished his phrase, she took his hand gently and took him to the room proudly, carefully, like if he was the most precious thing in the universe, because for her, he was! She was looking for a mat while he lay in bed and he smiled to realize that the bed was a little longer, and at that moment she ended up preparing the mat and turned around to see Wilt...and when she saw him smiling she was amazed to see that his smile was incredibly beautiful and amazing, even more than in the show, where she usually was able to see him through tv....but then she tried to turn away and look to other place, cos she thought Wilt could realize she was so amazed and excited; she knew she couldn't tell to anybody where she came from, because it could be too much to them and might scaring them or something. "It's supposed I don't know him! If he sees I'm amazed or excited he might find it so weird!!" she thought.
But no matter how much she tried, she just couldn't hide her amazement, her joy...or her ineffable ecstasy....it was so overwhelming that she felt her heart beat so fast that it could get out by her throat, by her nose or somewhere else; just look at him left her breathless, and she couldn't hide a really big glowing smile when she saw him lying there, smiling and relaxing in his classic pose, with the arm behind the neck, as he did in the episode "Room With a Feud" and she realized he already had a bed to sleep...well at least for now...
She felt invaded by a great excitement and glee, and although she knew she needed to look to another way because she couldn't hide his excitement, she couldn't stop looking at him, she couldn't stop to contemplate him in all his splendor; his smooth red skin, now real and palpable, his wonderful and sexy smile, his shiny and beautiful eyes, his sweet and warm expression, his cute little lobes, his so awesome and athletic figure...It was until she saw in his face a obvious gesture of surprise, then she turned her gaze to somewhere else, a little blushed again. Wilt was so overwhelmed by that so sweet way she looked at him, and that made him blushing too, and indeed, as he's so perceptive, he actually noticed something weird was happening, but he said nothing...So she just turned the lights off, and she lied on the mat, and prepared to sleep quietly at his side.
She was making a superhuman effort to try to sleep, but she couldn't sleep!! Sleep doesn't came to her for the thrill of being so close to Wilt, she was so excited that she was breathless, and she just couldn't wait until tomorrow to talk with him, she had so many questions to ask him!! like what is his favorite food or his favorite color, or why he always wear his socks on and he didn't leave his bare feet to see if they are so cool and so awesome.... she just wanted to say his feet are so cool and awesome and his hands too! with those "suction cups" as she read it from his great and tenacious fanbase ....she wanted to talk with him about his innumerable fans!! And tell him that in the place where she comes from, there was a TV show about him and everybody in Foster's Home, and there were a lot of people who really loved, respected and admired him! She wanted to tell him that the cannibal ghost who they believed they had caught was actually Bloo, or to ask him what happened that day with all those jellyfish...She just wanted to tell him he's truly awesome dancing or playing basketball, that he looks really awesome and snazzy in a formal suit, that she loves a lot how long his legs are and she just loves the masterful way in which he played the keyboard and his beautiful voice, she wanted to say him she's his most ardent fan!...and she loved him, SHE LOVES HIM TRULY, deeply, with all her heart! with all the force of her soul!!! For his cozy and warm personality, for his heart of gold, for his cheery and brave spirit!...But she couldn't!! She couldn't!!!
"I can't!!! I can't!!! I can't!!! I CAN'T!!!!!" She was repeating that herself again and again, lying in the mat, trying to calm herself down a bit, waiting for calm, trying to sleep....and suddenly she heard a sweet and gentle voice, that made her shudder with excitement!!...It was him! And he wasn't asleep yet!

- I'm sorry but, are you Ok? - He asked with genuine concern for his new friend.

- Uh….oh, Yeah! I'm fine! - She answered.

- Are you sure?....You look a bit nervous, do you had a nightmare?..
.
She laughed a bit. She was really amazed to notice he cared about her, and thought: "OH MY GOODNESS!!! It's him!!!! is really him!!! That's the Wilt I know!!!!!!"  and She just said:

Ohh no no! I'm fine yeah!!

- Uhmm..

Then he returned to lay his head on the pillow and stared at the ceiling, while he said:
-Sorry for take your bed…Do you want another pillow?

She stands a little above the floor to see him and says again with a big smile:
-Don't worry Wilt, I'm ok here!!! Really!

-Great! - He said finally, although not very satisfied - Thanks a lot for giving me your bed….but if you want I can go to my room...if you change your mind just tell me ok!!

- I will tell you, Ok. - She giggled a bit.

Oh! – He lifted his torso from the bed to look at her, suddenly remembering something - and I warn you sometimes I talk in my sleep!....

She looked at him very sweetly and smiled. She couldn't help but giggle a little again, and she thought for herself "I know it my dear, I know…and that's SO CUTEE!!!!" But she just said:

- Come on! don't said that!! I'm so glad you're here!!!

-Reall...

- Yes of course!! – the she got up from the mat, moved by a strange impulse - Come on Wilt!!! You always care about everybody!!!! Please! Just for one time accept....

And she did not finish his sentence, because he saw Wilt opened his eyes a lot and made a expression of overwhelming amazement. It was almost like he was saying "Ohh dear!...You know me!!!!" But the strange thing was that he didn't look freaked out, but very excited, just like someone who makes a fortunate and unexpected discovery, and he was really excited!
Then their eyes met, and suddenly the two were stared at each other, trapped by a powerful, beautiful, almost magical force. His eyes glittered more intensely with the moonlight, like two drops of dew hanging from a spider web, and they were much more beautiful...She didn't know if it was by the moonlight reflected through the open window, or just for the surprise ...but he looked incredibly handsome and dashing, his face reflected compassion and tenderness, and his majestic skin looked like velvet caressed by the moonlight.
She realized she shouldn't say that either, and she just said:

-- Just sleep! I'm ok!...Ok!...

And she smiled again and put her thumb up, emulating his classic sign she loved a lot...only to remember that she shouldn't do that either, but she thought "well, anyone can make that sign...but NO ONE makes it so great as him!!! That's for sure!!!"

Wilt smiled too and said: - Ok!
And the two returned to lay his head on the pillow

Wilt was thinking about the way she looked at him, and what would be the reason why she had offered her bed to him, or why she was so excited and glad to meet him if she didn't know him, or why he himself was felt so thrilled and joyful when she looked at him in that so sweet way! But mostly, he wondered why she admired him so much! He felt she loved him, and she already knew him, but he didn't wanted to say anything, in part because he thought maybe it was just his imagination...and thinking about it after a while he fell asleep.
But meanwhile, she couldn't sleep. She couldn't believe it! Her long-awaited, almost impossible change to meet Wilt was there, and it was real! "Oh my oh my oh my!!!" she thought. She still couldn't contain her excitement, she wanted to scream, she wanted to dance, she wanted to sing, wanted to jump by excitement!!!; she wanted to give 1000 laps running around the home, like Peanut Butter, Wilt and the other buddies did in "Room with a feud", to see if after that, she could finally get to sleep!!....She se was dying to get out of the mat and jump on him, and kiss him and caress and hold him lovingly, to tell him she loved him so deeply, and give him kisses all over his spectacular anatomy, with tenderness and passion, and make him hers right there...but she couldn't!!!  So, she was just here, rubbing his face with his hands, filled with pure joy, shuddering excitement and desire, while she thought of that.
But she knew she needed to calm down herself a little to get sleep, so she tried to breathe deeply, then she got out of the mat, thinking to go to the kitchen to drink something that help to calm her down a bit...but when she saw him there, sleeping peacefully, she couldn't avoid getting closer to the bed and sit on one edge to contemplate him sleeping quietly, in all his splendor, he was so adorable, so awesome, so majestic, so incredibly real!! as the REAL being of flesh and blood he already was!!!... "oh my! even when he's asleep he's so adorable and so awesome!" She thought.
She was approached a little more and she heard his breathing, she saw his belly moving while he was breathing. She knew She shouldn't do it because it might wake him up, but she couldn't avoid gently stroking his arm and give him a small and tender kiss on one of his cute little lobes, and in that instant she felt a wonderful, warm and cozy feeling, a feeling that filled her heart with pure joy and peace. Then she tucked him and she fell asleep in the mat, quietly, peaceful, and really happy to know that the most wonderful being in all the the whole universe was next to her....

Alternative/Extended end of the chaper made on May 2009

She knew She shouldn't do it because it might wake him up, but she couldn't avoid gently stroking his arm and give him a small and tender kiss on one of his cute little lobes, and in that instant she felt a wonderful, warm and cozy feeling, a feeling that filled her heart with pure joy and peace. And when she kissed him she heard a slight and sweet moan, she thought "sorta nightmare?" and she gently stroked one of his lobes to calm him down a little, thinking he was having a nightmare...
In that instant, she heard a slight moan again, a little higher this time, so sexy, yet so cute, smooth, warm and harmonious, as the purr of a cat when his master caresses it ...Then was when she realized with great joy he actually was enjoying the caress, and she thought pleasantly surprised "Hey! He likes it!!" with a huge smile. She looked at him sweetly and couldn't avoid making a giggle...and suddenly, like a powerful beam that falls in a storm, it came to her mind the hypothetical theory she made once, and she thought "Oh....my...good....OH MY GOOD!!! It means that my theory is TRUE!!!! it's true!! it's true!!!!! Oh my goodness!!!! I just can't believe it!!! Oohh myy! it's true!"
She couldn't stop being overwhelmingly amazed, pleasantly amazed, so much that she could barely couldn't contain her excitement; she covered her mouth to not scream from excitement to not wake him, and instead of it, she returned to rubbing his face with his hands, shuddering  with excitement.
She stood out of bed and looked out the window the starry sky, trying to calm herself down a bit.  The stars shone so intensely that night, they were amazingly beautiful....While she looked out the window, she was wondering why no one had realized that about Wilt before, just to repair in the obvious answer: "it's obviously because nobody pays attention to him" she thought. She calmed down a bit seeing the stars and she returned to sit quietly on one side of the bed, to continue stroking him lovingly a little bit more, before going to sleep in the mat...but she fell asleep on the bed, quietly, peaceful, and really happy to know that the most wonderful being in all the whole universe was next to her....
Some of you know that I've always loved a lot to write! Since I can remember, I wrote, and indeed when I was younger I used to write lots and lots of things, in those years in which I only went to school and I had no job, so I had all the afternoon off to write amazing stories, but many of my stories were lost...and later I couldn't write them again (I even can’t remember many of them) :(….That's why there are no tales of mine here…until now!:D
So, What is this?.... Well, this is a small part of a fanfic setting in Foster's Home world that I was doing in 2008. I would love to finish it, but as some of you know, I don’t feel inspired to do this anymore, and when I was inspired, school and work didn’t leave me time for writing, so I never finished it....But the good news is I had the change to write this tiny fragment! and let me tell you, it was something really fun do do!! :D It was so exciting and pleasant to write that story, which was something very weird to me! :XD: It was so weird and funny the fact I had returned to my passion for writing with a story like that, cause before that time I had never written any love story, or even anything remotely related to the romance! :lol: Oh man! No!! :XD: :rofl: :rofl:
I was rather like those people who literally “run away” from these holidays :lol: and obviously I knew the reason, it was because these holidays always reminded me what I never had, what I don't have and I don't know if I will, the thing for which many people around me I always looked me like a freaky thing (yeah, included my family) due the society's stereotype about teens and their boyfriends and girlfriends, and of course all that thing made me feel sad for a loong time (I'm not quite sure if it's an advantage of being intelligent and be able to analyze what happened, because when I realized it, I didn't liked it at all!!) so I always tried to find something that made me get rid of "that reason", the stereotype, that kind of influence, just like a scientist who tirelessly seeks a cure for a disease that has been plaguing directly to him or or someone he loves, since many time ago, but obviously without success... Until that 2008 when I met Foster and Wilt! :D I don't know why but when I knew Wilt and understood many things about love, many interesting things, like the reason why girls makes Mary Sues (it is a very interesting phenomenon :giggle: in fact I've talked about what I noticed it ) and surprisingly yeah, Wilt removed my dislike to Valentine's Day! :D Well, now I can be in peace in these holidays, I have more self-confidence and I can even talk and make art about Valentine’s Day like everyone else. I think I'm no longer so susceptible to the influence of so commercialized Valentine's Day, the one which people rubs in one's face in this month and tells you "if you don't have a boyfriend or girlfriend you will never be happy!" And if occasionally I feel blue, cos I can't say I didn't feel blue sometimes, what I do is to remind what I learned before, and that makes me feel better, because now with what I've learned I can use my own criteria. And that’s a true treasure! And to not make a long story, at that time I had the story in my mind but I wasn’t quite sure if write it or not cos I thought it may sound ridiculous, like some excessively corny movies or books that always gave me feel embarrassed for them and made me run away :lol: …Oh man! I didn’t wanted someone saying “it’s so corny!!” when read this XD, I wanted to do something cute, but not corny!
That afternoon, I was doing my homework in my dad’s office, and he had gone home to take a nap, so the evening was very nice, the environment around me was welcoming, so quietly, everything was in peace, just like the way I love it when I need to focus or feeling inspired! But that day, it was a perfect day for another neat homework finished on time! And I was going to do that…when suddenly, I felt an overwhelming urge to write! Oh god! It was really overwhelming! I still remember it! XD...It was as if something very deep inside called me and say "write! write! It will be great!" Like when someone is very excited for something and shakes you by the arms, and then you shudder with emotion too, and in fact, that was precisely what Faik said when he felt that impulse in me! XD I remember he also said “Write something now…if you don’t do it, then forget this story, because I doubt we will have another opportunity to write like this in a billion of years!" And I thought "Oh god…That’s a long time!" being aware he was right, but still not quite sure about it, so Faik insisted saying "See?...Please! Please!! Do it!!! I’m sure it will be fabulous!!!" with a huge and extremely glowing smile that I didn’t wanted to see, because it made my excitement and the need to write (and my heartbeat!) increase. And I was supposed to do my homework! XDD I had to do homework! XD…And no, it wasn’t a “puppy dog face”, rather it was the genuine smile of someone actually invaded by the thrill of being about to create something really awesome! (by the way, he rarely makes the doggy face, he has more sophisticated ways to convince people XD) like when someone discovers something really amazing after much research. That's how I finally realized the story was ready to being written! because when Faik makes that expression and says that something will be great, it's because it really will be great! (and he’s always damn right! XD) so I didn’t say anything more and I started to write!
Holy Heavens! I spent like 2 or 3 hours writing that! :XD: until it was the way I wanted and I left my homework aside, and when I finished it I spent another hour and half translating it to make it as close to the original! And in fact I think the English version is way prettier than the original!!:excited: is more aesthetic and more poetic, more harmonious! (I love English a lot because it makes my writing and speech more elegant, it makes me be more eloquent) So I spent all that time without doing homework, but I believe all my love, dedication and effort in this was worth a lot!!! :excited: :love:....Or what do you think? How much do you think this piece of history worth?...

---------------Oh man! It’s priceless!...

Hehehe...You see? Nobody can put a price on a good story!:XD:...And neither I. That’s the reason why I posted it here, after all it’s a story, so I wanted to give it a good place! :D
This story was originally posted as a comment on [link] At first I thought I posted it there to not feel the pressure of making a fanfic, but now I think was actually mostly for other reason.
I realized since a few years ago, I've put my drawings in a good place here, and now I appreciate them a lot, even that my dad say my art is useless. But the truth is, I’ve always underestimated my stories and my writing in general, whether stories in my journal, sci-fi stories for future movies and shows, or a narrative story that always is unnoticed for being a simple tale about everyday life, like this comment you're reading right now about what happened when I wrote the part of story up there!...I can appreciate awesome things that others make, and I can discover talents in almost everyone, and I really enjoy to say a good comment to someone who make great art here, specially to talented and also kind artist!….but the sad thing is, I have been really tough with myself, and I never appreciated my own writings as I should, and I should! (I used to be very hard with my own art, too) since the first time my dad always said that writers and painters, and artists in general, rarely triumphed and almost always lived and die in misery. Now, I just wonder why I spend many years like that just because my parents (specially my dad) always told me that write was just a waste of time and something silly, and that my stories were ridiculous...But now some friends here made me realize that, I can change it! :D I’m not quite sure I can put my stories about what happens in my daily life as a prose or something here, if they accept them as literature, but from now I will give more appreciation to what I write. Thanks a lot to :iconsoylakoza: :iconjameson9101322: :iconblackmage339: who made me feel my comments worth! And to :iconantgirl1: she liked this story when I posted it first.
So this is a part of the tale, edited and extended because it had little spelling mistakes and missing details (the extended end it’s from [link] ) but not just any tale; is a very special story that I wrote from the depths of my being, a story with my love and devotion, a story with a part of me, with a part of you if you wish, if you feel connected with my character and look some kind of reminiscent of yourself in it (I think there's something of her inside every Wilt fangirl) this is the story that brought me back to my passion for writing stories, is my first official history over 7 years! (I think... I'm not sure when was the last time you wrote a real story) and today to share it with you now in “fanfic” category, makes me really happy ^^ I’m not quite sure if will feel inspired again to finish this thing, or if I could have the time either (since for example this time, I write this comment little by little, in this week) but I hope to feel inspired and have the change to write again soon, this or another story, before I forget them! :noes: if I do it, I'll post my tales here! :D And who knows?...maybe they will be movies or books someday!..
And remember, each day you have the opportunity to make a masterpiece, and if you do not like how your piece of art came out today, you always can make a more beautiful one tomorrow! :D
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